Sunday, January 25, 2009

Im sorry i messed up on Duos name, its actually Gage.

Saturday, January 24, 2009

Sorry i cant write a post today, but i will post something short.

My next story is about a pirate (13 or 14 years old) who gets lost, has lots of cation, and likes adventures.

Hears a sample part of my story.

Duo (the main pirate character) was running probably the fastest heed ever ran in his life to get to his ship and crew. but by the time he got to the shore, he was two late, stranded on an island with nothing but him and his sword. After two hours of waiting, Duo finally disited they weren't coming back. finally the natives cought up with him. he was in so much trouble.

So if you're interested in pirates, this is the story for you.

Monday, January 19, 2009

ill just get to the end of my story, I've got a new one thought up.

Yak and his friends got to the planet. their was a sound, loud and after it was another one. Yak saw an oddly shaped building. He and his friends got inside for cover. their was a guy wearing a funny outfit that said Sargent on it. he said " Wat are you doing here? and more importantly, wares my donut! by the way, these robots don't look like earth inventions, ware are you from anyway?"

Yak was scared stiff. The sargent turned away to talk to a guy who said "the enemy is setting up anti aircraft guns."

Sarge said "we cant take you home Kid, our transports are usless, or at least our aircraft."

Yak didn't know what to do. sarge gave him some type of invention hede never seen befor.
The sargent kiked Yak out with all his buddies. Outside theire were some people who were shooting at him. then, one of his robots took out some guns and for defense, fired his matene guns.

Then the other troops came out and started fighting. at the end of the war, Yak was given the newberry intelegense award. Yak whent home and Earth never saw him agean.

EPULOG

one day, Yak found out he could smelt his award. he had only enough to male one robot with it, but a useful one. it made ether a hot dog, salad, or orange juce.

FIN

Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Sorry, i cant write a post today, to much homework! Maybe later.

Friday, December 12, 2008

The Robot Making Gunner: part 1

In the fourth planet ever created (planet Uge), there lived an inventor, his name was Yakio ( Ya-kee-o). He didn't like his name, so people just called him Yak. Yak lived by himself with a few robot friends. Yak was never bored and was always thinking of something. He enjoyed building explosives and lots and lots of robots. Once, he saw a blinking star. He wanted to check it out, so he whipped up an invention that could take him and his robots to see that blinking star.

Yak and his robot crew, soared through space until they saw a meteor coming right at them! The meteor went past them. They were safe. Whoops, I said it to soon! The meteor curved back and went past them again. Then it started orbiting them. One of the robots that likes to dig flew up and landed on the meteor and started harvesting minerals. After the small miner was done harvesting, it put it into its storage tank and went back on the flying space craft. Once again, they were coming closer and closer to the blinking star. Their voyage was almost over. But when Yak realized he discovered a planet, he thought it was the end of the beginning.

Yak and his crew of robots landed on the planet and Yak's two gunmen robots went off the hover craft first, then the miner, then Yak, then his five probes and last of all, Yaks two equipment carriers. Yak thought he'd call this planet Opal, for its Opaly colored atmosphere. It was a very, very, small planet. It only took the curious explorers two days to go around the planet by foot. They took off for space and saw another blinking star, they knew it was a planet and couldn't wait for more Adventure.

The end......of the beginning.